The Revelation by Vijay Premkumar

Vijay PremkumarThis is unfair! I have never seen you blush so much! You keep chatting on the phone 28 hours a day! You are constantly messaging, even while asleep…

“So,” I said, looking at the beaming face. “I can see something good is brewing… Won’t you share it with me?”

There was a laugh. A blush, rather.

“No?”

The blush, again…

“Aw, come on… no secrets between us! We’ve never had secrets ever since we were best friends… I know everything about you, and you about me. Out with it!” I begged, almost.

“Hmmm…” the response.

“You… you… this is unfair! I have never seen you blush so much! You keep chatting on the phone 28 hours a day! You are constantly messaging, even while asleep. You have this look around you that says… you’re in love! Tell me…”

A nod of the head. And the blush again…

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“Damn, you! You turned dumb or what? Why don’t you open your mouth, and talk now, you ass? Can’t you see I am trying to have a conversation?” I chided mockingly.

Still the blushing continued.

I was annoyed.

“Okay, I will check things out myself… I will get to know myself… wait, you… you… you…” And I walked out, throwing the largest pillow in the room at my best friend.

***

I was in the kitchen, trying to make some hot tea when I felt a hand on my shoulders.

I turned around, to see the back of a photo thrust into my face.

I quickly snatched the picture, ran to my room, switched on the light and fan and plonked on my soft bed.

As I turned the photo around, I froze. For a while, and I do not know how long, time froze. It seemed like the end of the world. I just could not believe it… It could not be… It was… it was… devastating.



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3 comments on “The Revelation by Vijay Premkumar

  • 1
    Debashis
    March 30th, 2008 13:24

    Hi Vijay –

    So the best friend is already engaged and that’s the engagement photo?

    Sir, this is the only thing coming to mind;)

    Hope it’s going good at your end.

    Regards
    Debashis

  • 2
    Vijay
    April 1st, 2008 10:51

    Hello Debashis, things are just fine here at Bangalore. And how are things with you?

    And regarding this piece… my answer is to let the readers decide what the picture contains. It could be the face of the person the protagonist is in love with, it could be the face of a much-wanted criminal whom the protagonist knows… whatever!

  • 3
    Anmol
    April 17th, 2008 11:56

    Vijay,
    The person in the photo could be the your brother or some friend who you know is married or engaged with someone else….or could be another girl ;)



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